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Owl Haiku
the owl's ribbed coo
like feathered hands, massaging
my taut, anxious soul
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Review Request (Direction):
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
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Comments
Shadowdancer3349
Sun, 2018-09-30 08:15
Greg
Spot on nicely done
gregwa8
Sun, 2018-09-30 13:57
Thank you!
Thank you!