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The Artist
Like molten lava the passion of creativity
through the soul of the artist flows
The sweet sultry tones
stoke the fire
illuminating his eyes
which see the world as something new
Filled with beauty and mystery
in every brush stroke
the simplicity of the man
belies the complexity of his hand
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Geezer
Thu, 2020-05-07 16:34
I like this...
How about saying: Seeing the world anew each day?
~ Gee.
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c lynn brooks
Mon, 2020-05-11 07:00
Gee
thanks for the read
I like the short sound of that line
but I thank you for your suggestion
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c lynn brooks
Fri, 2020-05-08 06:58
teddy
Thank you reading .I did use your suggestions
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lovedly
Fri, 2020-05-08 07:06
passion is common to man and woman
1.illuminating ''his'' eyes
2.the simplicity of the ''man''
belies the complexity of ''his'' hand
you may like to reconsider
1.one's eyes
2.you may like here
to apply a poet's mind
c lynn brooks
Fri, 2020-05-08 08:15
lovedly
thank you for reading. why the quotation marks
Chrys
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c lynn brooks
Mon, 2020-05-11 12:14
Mark
Thank you. I don 't think anyone can answer that question guess it depends on what one believes
Chrys
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