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TORSION
bend me with this
crimson crush
you twist me in your heady lush
I churn desired
and admonished
darkness cherish
onyx
and lash
bite the torrent
words that flow
and worship
pain that exstacy
extracts below
made me kneel
make me heal
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pleiades
Sun, 2011-02-27 21:35
erotic redemption
erotic redemption
(what is wrong with me?)
i need a cigarette now.....
xx
weirdelf
Mon, 2011-02-28 01:44
The Rapture for the 21C!
I simply cannot flaw this, it works at so many levels.
All I can say is,
thankyou,
sir bard
cheers,
Jess
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pleiades
Mon, 2011-02-28 02:02
had to come back to this
had to come back to this
e..............it is SO good
p
Geezer
Mon, 2011-02-28 03:35
A bit like...
some of your older work. The darkness and sensuality, are superb ! [ecstasy]. Many levels here. ~ Gee
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Kailashana2
Mon, 2011-02-28 07:34
the secret life.
the secret life.
Esker
Mon, 2011-02-28 13:44
and this is for U
how can I say
that I putter along
and then twist out of myself
leaping natural and incur
a new old self
behind the keyboard
smooth as silk
I exist on this level more then
the reserved
ahh but you all figure that out
by now
how can I read Kerouak
and others
Buckowski
Im darker then I leave
here
deeper then most
these are the spice of my
life
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