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buoyancy
tethered down
this heavy crown
in dew dross languid home
the ghosts are heeding
fastly speeding
and safety's far from home
gleaned images of sun
dappled hands and fire forth
tilt to faces searching
the years
the yearning
this snow cascade
filling steps all in
the right
the wrong
and nights surrender
speeds in her tome
her rhyme her home
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Comments
Frenchf
Sat, 2013-02-16 14:26
Nice rhythm
To the short lines
Linda Moses
Sun, 2013-02-17 13:53
Esker
I like the way you put your words together. It is art. My favorite lines are
This snow cascade
filing steps all in
the right
in the wrong
Reminds me of life and how we try to get through
Linda
He who conquers self , has won a great battle
Esker
Sun, 2013-02-17 17:55
unhappiness decends
like a beautiful vibrant wind
plow through the obstacles
then sometimes go around
it
yea there lays the abyss
or sweet misfortune
that will bring a wish
I know
neither
but to blind trust
the mishappenstence
of the going
going on
Thank You!