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Crest Hope detrimentz
a basin of years
washed
dust bowl salvations
in gritty glass prints
I was the ghost
of reasons
flown through
turbulent
tides
and you
the wings
of a broken salvation
rimmed in a dark night
like a bitter eclipse
pockets of stars
shinning
like payphone qaurters
a chord rested
between bars
and in the stillness
a mid step spark
of reason
ignitions
tumbling walls
of fortifications
I felt the hitch
in a breath
telephones
and tears
wound with
tapestry
colors
tested in
the fires
of intense brilliance
the subtle taste
of resonance
chalk kisses
in a nervous
touch
tremolous
seasons
each fragrant
leaf brought about
with gravities love
wolves out of season
drinking stream fountian
sighs
our carapace locket heart
on its tricky lock
opens yet
its arms
to a pain
dripped
from a mouth
of passionate
desolation
Comments
lonlyhrtsclub13
Sat, 2013-09-28 08:05
a presence
Felt yet so far away
Grief stricken
Memories flood the mind
Overrun with unexpressed emotion
The longing for a chance
To change the past
To say I love you more
But would it have made it last?
I stand in the shadows
Wondering what could
Have gone differently
Was it me who changed
Or you....
Keep Writing,
Carrie
"Quoth said the Raven, NEVERMORE"
weirdelf
Sat, 2013-09-28 17:51
this is orgami
fucking awesome, every word and image potent.
Welcome back.
cheers,
Jess
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Esker
Sat, 2013-09-28 21:07
It was you I thought of when I hit post..
It felt like the Old...
stepping through that era...
Appreciate it mate!
Ian.T
Sun, 2013-09-29 04:28
Steve
As Jess says this is Orgami, I would only add that this is where Orgami and Esker merge into a dance of feelings and wonderful words,
Yours Ian.T
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