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Forbidden
Only angels lament
with the moon rising as
days grow shorter and poems
are distant in the light. Do not
leave the word love all alone to
wither on a tree like a half-eaten
apple core.
Just whisper a tender
goodbye.
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Comments
Rula
Mon, 2013-09-23 21:48
so tender
I liked the mood of this dear Anna.
I'd start a new stanza with "Do not leave the world love alone....
but it's your poem and you know better what you want to say.
Thanks for sharing
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Esker
Fri, 2015-01-16 11:03
tasted and forgotten...
best to be pondered then ignored
half eaten
post love..
excellent poem
about forbidden
Thank You!
Sparrow
Fri, 2015-01-16 11:25
Anna
There will be no goodbyes as the whispered love will draw you closer.
Lovely write but NO goodbyes, Yours, Ian xx
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Yours as always, Ian.T, Sparrow, and Yenti