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general malaise and some happiness
a big city n the fall has depressed parts of everyone there is joy in the sun
not usually cold sometimes we have to seach for any joy like watching squirells or birds
watching listening or t.v. music sports.anger like beeping horns cars goes with the malaise
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
Please use care (this is a sensitive subject for me, do not critique harshly)
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Last few words:
i hope people can enjoy this
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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