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light

we live with light can't live without it and shades of color shades of color fall leaves
color full coats in the winter obviously less color i the late fall and winter but there's brilliant sunlight off snowflakes Halloween thanksgiving bright colored pies and ice cream at thanksgiving the parade Christmas lights saves us hard to live without it on a winter night and anytime the light in our lovers or wife's eyes babies and children's eyes the light in our dreams the light of t.v.

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Free verse
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i hope this brings inspiration
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Not Explicit Content
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