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M-79..
There is crickets over at the tree line
They are keeping me awake
the dreams away
lock and load
and wait for the silence..
Jiminy cricket can book it out of there!!!
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Comments
Ian.T
Sun, 2012-09-02 11:03
Steve
There are, There is, crickets over there, well you must take care, which way round is the M-79 or you'll sure get Shrapnel in your behind..
Loved the write, but a bit of excessive force being used.
Grenades and cricket don't mix.
A bat and ball and three silly sticks,
Not that sort of cricket ????Yours Ian.T
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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..
Esker
Sun, 2012-09-02 20:44
You have me in stitches Im slapping my britches
excellent Ian!!!
Thank You!