Join the Neopoet online poetry workshop and community to improve as a writer, meet fellow poets, and showcase your work. Sign up, submit your poetry, and get started.
OCEAN OF HUMANITY
IN A BIG CITY,, IT IS LIKE AN OCEAN, ITS HARDER TO SEE AND PERCEIVE THINGS TOO CLEARLY, LIKE WETHER YOU ARE HANDSOME' OR BEAUTIFULL.
PERSPECTIVES CHANGE RAPIDLY PEOPLE LOOK DIFFERENT' LIKE A FOGGY DAY
MORE LIKE FISH CLEAR DAYS' MORE GEOMETRIC PERFECT' LIKE NOSES.
SOMEONE ONCE SAID TO ME INA CAFE CAN YOU SEE YOUR FACE TO ME THAT WOULD
BE MOSTLY IMPOSSIBLE.
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
Please use care (this is a sensitive subject for me, do not critique harshly)
Review Request (Direction):
What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Is the internal logic consistent?
Last few words:
I HOPE PEOPLE FEEL PERCEIVE THIS ALLTHOUGH IT COULD BE WRONG
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
(c) Neopoet.com. No copyright is claimed by Neopoet to original member content.