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Return To The Sea
Silent. all is silent
my thoughts wander
the whisper of the fan
it's balmy breeze reminds me of days
sitting on a beach listening to the crashing waves
on a cool summers night
the shorebirds that scurry playing chicken with the waves
listening to the pounding surf
the seagulls calling
I was born of the sea
it is my home
some will return to the earth
I will return to the sea
the place where I was born
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Last few words:
I'm at my best and at peace
when by the ocean were all born in water wee we not
I do not believe I ever left
after all my sign is Pieces which is a water sign
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c lynn brooks
Sat, 2020-08-29 06:35
teddy
thank you
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Geezer
Sat, 2020-08-29 07:41
Images...
straight from the beach. I think you have captured the scene perfectly. ~ Gee.
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c lynn brooks
Sat, 2020-08-29 10:32
Gee
thank you I tried to
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c lynn brooks
Sun, 2020-08-30 07:17
Jerry
thank you Jerry
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