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Spheres

Submitted by Rosewood Apothecary on Sat, 2022-10-01 03:45

May my love pervade your sphere
Enrich and charge the brittle air
Enhance and not invade your space
Hearts beat truth, intentions clear

Style / type: 
Structured: Western
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Review Request (Direction): 
What did you think of my title?
Editing stage: 
Editing - draft
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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Geezer

Sun, 2022-10-02 11:14

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is good, it drew me in and once the poem is read, makes sense. ~ Geez.
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