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A Star Forged
It was with the sarcastic gusto
Of her first words to him
That she became her own invitation
To the end of his contact list.
There she resided shining
Like a new born star
Amongst the ashes
Of burned out relationships.
The flotsam of friendships
Both false and forlorn
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Jackweb
Tue, 2022-09-06 04:43
First impressions...!
First impressions matter, for good and bad. They are fine when you like someone on first meeting...
Thought brilliantly crafted from insight, Excellent!!!
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"By virtue of creativity, my literary genre is poetry".
~Jackweb