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the sun

people are so fickle and changeable emotional
the only things you can depend on are the sun rocks
ocean and mountains religion also a stabilizer
your wife the time math which goes forever and gravity
laws of physics

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing stage: 
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

Comments

poetry is concentrated truth like orange juice concentrate
alot like the laws of physics

author comment

that this is just a quotation, an unfinished poem, a statement. If you are going to let it stand as a work, you should at least comma-tize your list. ~ Geezer.
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