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when the water lily speaks
Intersecting triangles and connecting dots
jumbles of words
on a silver and gold charm bracelet,
your head jingling on her belt.
Ha!
You laughed.
The goddess in her disguise
bested and played you for
all she is.
You must dance to her tune,
disembodied from the neck down.
She is without mercy.
She is your soul.
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Comments
Kailashana2
Tue, 2012-02-21 07:04
the Good egg
the Good egg
there is no such thing
as a bad egg,
or even a rotten apple in a barrel
when we're all in the same
nest depending on earth
for survival
and love to make it real.
~A
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Ian.T
Tue, 2012-02-21 08:41
Anna
A Picasso in words would love to hear the thoughts that put this to paper, with many an intricate vision of being, then to blame the Soul ???
Yours, Ian.T
.
There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..
Kailashana2
Tue, 2012-02-21 10:33
Blaming is a human phenomenon
Blaming is a human phenomenon. The soul enures all. Is all.
Thank you for your comment, Ian.
~A
weirdelf
Thu, 2012-02-23 04:26
I don't understand it,
but I love it.
The words are magic.
cheers,
Jess
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