Join the Neopoet online poetry workshop and community to improve as a writer, meet fellow poets, and showcase your work. Sign up, submit your poetry, and get started.

Come

Submitted by kowque on Wed, 2024-06-19 19:41

I feel myself rotting
Waiting,
For,
You.

Editing stage:

Editing - rough draft

Content level:

Not Explicit Content

Opt-in: Neopoet AI will critique your poem.

Comments

neopoet

Thu, 2024-06-20 01:41

Neopoet AI 5-29-23 version

The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

This poem has a strong sense of longing and decay, creating a sense of tension and unease. The repetition of "Waiting, For, You" emphasizes the speaker's anticipation and perhaps a feeling of being stuck in a state of decay until the arrival of the subject. Consider expanding on the emotions or imagery to provide more depth and clarity to the reader. Additionally, exploring different poetic devices such as metaphor or symbolism could enhance the overall impact of the poem.

Please send feedback about Neo (our computer generated critique system) to https://www.neopoet.com/contact

Leslie

Thu, 2024-06-20 00:35

kowque

simple, painful and honest. I am grateful that you are writing again. You are an inspiration!

All of God's children singing, holding hands in the rain!

kowque

Thu, 2024-06-20 01:41

Thank you

Always

Koki

author comment

Leslie

Thu, 2024-06-20 01:48

Kowque

God bless!!! I know that you out up a valiant fight!

All of God's children singing, holding hands in the rain!

kowque

Thu, 2024-06-20 10:47

It's hard

Articulating everything.

So, I'm keeping things short.

But thank you for taking the time to read and comment

Koki

author comment

Geezer

Fri, 2024-06-21 12:56

Yeah...

Just keep writing, it helps. ~ Geezer.
.

There is value to commenting and critique, tell us how you feel about our work.
This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place.

Neopoet

Come