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Neopoet Weekly 06/30/24 to 07/06/24 Contest Winner!
This week’s winner is Candlewitch with the following poem
Wood-smoke
Submitted by Candlewitch
We mellowed...
reclining by the camp fire
after a day of splashing,
swimming, and water games.
I shivered as
evening came in to surround us
with a cooling breeze.
Your fisherman knit sweater
you placed about my shoulders,
staved off a slight chill.
Your glittering orbs
held me intoxicated.
As I felt the last of
the sun's rays
leach out of the sand
Quietly exchanging daydreams,
I noticed, wood-smoke, was
the color of your smiling eyes!
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Comments
kowque
Tue, 2024-07-09 23:50
Oooh
I loved this
Very great use of imagery
Koki
Words Ablaze
Wed, 2024-07-17 07:02
What a sweet finish, telling
What a sweet finish, telling of a love strong and deep.