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Test poem

Submitted by neopoet on Sun, 2011-10-30 18:41

Test

Editing stage:

Editing - rough draft

Comments

andrew

Sun, 2011-10-30 18:42

sometimes short is sweet but i feel a complete lack of any effort or style here. the rythm was too short, the N too caght up in th readers reaction, and no alliteration or imagery whatsoever.
Fail.
but if there is a poet on here with the handle 'neopoet' i think that's awesome.

weirdelf

Mon, 2012-02-06 22:52

formatting test

Is there an external or internal conflict
What is the style of the language (is it formal, conversational?)
What poetic devices are used? e.g.
1. rhyme
2. meter
3. assonance, consonance, alliteration

cheers,
Jess
A new workshop on the most important element of poetry-
'Rhythm and Meter in Poetry'
https://www.neopoet.com/workshop/rhythm-and-meter-poetry

weirdelf

Mon, 2012-02-06 22:54

again

How do these poetic devices affect the tone of the poem?
How does the imagery affect the poem
1. what kinds of imagery are used?
2. simile
3. metaphor

cheers,
Jess
A new workshop on the most important element of poetry-
'Rhythm and Meter in Poetry'
https://www.neopoet.com/workshop/rhythm-and-meter-poetry

weirdelf

Tue, 2012-02-07 02:33

nada

cheers,
Jess
A new workshop on the most important element of poetry-
'Rhythm and Meter in Poetry'
https://www.neopoet.com/workshop/rhythm-and-meter-poetry

Ian.T

Tue, 2012-02-07 03:05

Test

Capital "T" I think is called for, and the only perspective I could see was in the Authors Picture.
Rather bland, Yours Sparrow La La..

PS:- Yenti will be spitting snakes, as this is getting more comments than some of his poems... He-He
Oh! and test is an anagram of stet so I suppose we will have to let it be....

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

test108

Sun, 2012-03-04 12:44