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Crying After You

Submitted by Kristen H. on Mon, 2024-07-29 15:55

you meant everything to me
and I meant nothing to you

now here I am,
crying after you
while you smile back

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content
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Mon, 2024-07-29 22:00

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The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

The contrast between the depth of emotion felt by the speaker and the apparent indifference of the other person is effectively conveyed in your poem. The brevity of the lines enhances the impact of the emotions expressed. Consider exploring more vivid imagery or specific details to further engage the reader and create a more immersive experience. Additionally, you may want to experiment with different poetic devices such as metaphors or similes to enrich the emotional depth of the poem.

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