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Final Handshake
A few sermons said
he couldn't have recorded
draped in military colors
and saluted
suddenly recalled was a soldier
wanted to get up
but was nailed
taken to the crematorium
slid into an incinerator
nearest kith and kin
his spouse
silently wept
God let's shake hands
so far I had kept him
now you take over
as you are of heaven
the only single owner
I'm awaiting your tenancy
until then will pray feverishly
Lord we all have come to thank
Yes we know
you only can see
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Free verse
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Path to eternity...
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Lavender
Fri, 2023-03-10 10:12
Final Handshake
Hello, Lovedly,
This is extremely touching. Just beautiful.
Lav
lovedly
Fri, 2023-03-10 10:20
Hi Lav
Thank you Lav
This one has touched so many hearts
author commentGeezer
Fri, 2023-03-10 11:02
Very different...
from your usual. Maybe there is something you've been holding back?
~ Geez.
.
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lovedly
Fri, 2023-03-10 11:20
No Gee
On Medical advice after VIRAL VERTIGO my splst told me to avoid going to grief paces
Three days ago I just had to
COMPOSED this visual poem in my mind No tears at all
So I posted it now ....
Different yes AT 83 one has seen the whole world via different spectrum ....Perhaps.. this may just be a sample.Thanks for spotting it ...Dear friend Geez
author commentObadiah Grey
Wed, 2024-02-21 11:58
This was a touching piece by
This was a touching piece by an interesting man,
hope you're well and thriving.
Obi.
Candlewitch
Wed, 2024-02-21 12:18
Sweet Lovedly,
Where are you darlin'? who posted this?
*many hugs, Cat
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Geezer
Wed, 2024-02-21 14:13
Yeah...
Where did this come from?
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Candlewitch
Wed, 2024-02-21 15:21
I have a gut feeling...
That our Lovedlly has passed on to brighter fields of poetry, songs and Love. Go with our love, and be free...
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Geezer
Wed, 2024-02-21 15:38
I think...
you are right. A final goodbye? A man of mystery; I guess he had the last word after all. I'm gonna miss your egotistical butt!
~ Geez.
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