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I woke up

Submitted by kowque on Fri, 2024-08-02 13:27

Realised
The world
Was coming to an end
Now
I
Live
In
The
Moment

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Fri, 2024-08-02 19:30

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Geezer

Fri, 2024-08-02 14:55

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I think that you should have the title as the first line of the poem,
but you should put it down where the poem begins.
Using the first line of the piece is a very acceptable way to begin a poem.
I agree, we should live more in the moment; not always...
because we should plan for the future, but yes, living today, in the now, has benefits.
~ Geez.
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