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Love

Submitted by kowque on Thu, 2024-08-15 11:16

The feeling,
the sheer,
the utter,
.....catastrophe of love
New love
Mature love
Old love

There is an ache
To caging all this hope
In your soul

You whisper promises to
Your higher Power

You promise
To behave

You promise
You will never take
Love for granted

You whisper spells
During the witching hour

You look at the amber moon

And wade in hope

For new, present and lost
Love

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neopoet

Thu, 2024-08-15 17:20

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The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

Your poem "Love" captures the different stages and complexities of love through vivid imagery and emotions. The repetition of "love" at the beginning of each stanza emphasizes its significance and evolution over time. The references to promises, spells, and the amber moon add depth to the theme of love as a powerful force that can both uplift and burden the soul. Consider exploring more specific details or experiences to further engage the reader and create a stronger connection to the theme. Additionally, refining the structure and flow of the poem could enhance its impact and coherence.

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Candlewitch

Wed, 2024-09-25 07:38

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my favorite lines are:

You whisper spells
During the witching hour

You look at the amber moon

And wade in hope

For new, present and lost
Love

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kowque

Sun, 2024-09-29 02:32

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That LOVE love,
I love it for everyone.

It's beautiful to be a part of, in any form.

Thank you for your touching comment.

Koki

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Leslie

Thu, 2024-09-26 07:14

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Wow! You have really outdone yourself. That is an awesome poem. You are becoming more and more engaged with your feelings. Did it release pent up emotion?

Today never knows what tommorow will bring!

kowque

Sun, 2024-09-29 02:33

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Excuse my late response to your email.
My toddler is teething and had decided we must all be her slaves.

Thank you for stopping by!

:)

Koki

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