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Mantra for a better day
So what if you can’t reach any conclusions
choices unsure
direction lost
nothing resolved
peace of mind unattained
Reject self-centered ugly emotion
leave behind wasted energy
opportunities untaken
mistakes fear frozen tracks
self-inflicted pain
As Satch said, never look back
take a stand
be a part of something
maybe catch a little magic in the wink of an eye
a warm sweet smile
Life is waiting beyond four walls
see the sunrise the moon on high
reach beyond yourself
get past barriers imposed or imagined
never let indulgence or self pity win
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Wed, 2023-11-08 00:00
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Lavender
Wed, 2023-11-08 13:26
Mantra For A Better Day
Hello, Richard,
I love the energy in this. Ugly emotion, wasted energy - replaced with catching the magic in the small, but important pieces of life. A lovely mantra, indeed.
Thank you,
L
Richard Milne
Wed, 2023-11-08 13:32
Lavender
Thanks for reading and for the feedback. Bless you...
Lavender
Wed, 2023-11-08 13:50
Most welcome!
Very inspiring!
L
Richard Milne
Wed, 2023-11-08 14:52
Sweet
You're sweet as the scent of lavender...