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Me Refashioned
There you are
A moment ago you wasn’t there.
Then as if out of nowhere you came
Making this grand entrance into my life.
Like an imp, a gnome
Like little Miss nobody who never was
But always were.
From the very first time we got connected
you have hunted me
chased me as if I was a renegade
like a maroon I dwelt in the inner most part of the forest
even with look-outs barriers and fortifications
you raced to my heart…to my core
these defences no match for your determination
for there you had to be….
Of me..control you have taken.
Possession of me – my soul, my heart, my mind, my body - have been your every intent.
For since you have found me
my life you have completely rejigged – you have torn me apart
Only to refashion me in your image - with your mercy less claws.
You held me in this secure grip and wicked embrace
mixing your blood with mine with your blood sucking fangs
with your tongue darting, probing down my ear
At the same time nibbling whilst softly saying my name Willy
arousing me back to life.
Then you proceed to complete the staking of your claim.
Comments
Candlewitch
Thu, 2012-03-01 12:14
Hello Willy,
I see it has been awhile since your last post, so welcome back. I love a good dark poem, vampire poems included. Interesting title, language usage and structure. I liked these lines best:
Only to refashion me in your image - with your mercy less claws.
You held me in this secure grip and wicked embrace
mixing your blood with mine with your blood sucking fangs
with your tongue darting, probing down my ear
At the same time nibbling whilst softly saying my name Willy
arousing me back to life.
Then you proceed to complete the staking of your claim.
always, Cat (& eddy)
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Willy
Thu, 2012-03-01 15:17
i must thank you two folds:
i must thank you two folds: one for you graciously welcoming me back. I feel flattered and even honoured to know someone has kept tabs on me..(lol) and the other was for the kind comments.
its so long since i was last here that it is as if i have to relearn the different options available. but i am looking forward to participate and enjoy doing what poets do on Neopoets.
be rest assured i will return the kind gesture.
always Willy
Willy
Thu, 2012-03-01 15:17
i must thank you two folds:
i must thank you two folds: one for you graciously welcoming me back. I feel flattered and even honoured to know someone has kept tabs on me..(lol) and the other was for the kind comments.
its so long since i was last here that it is as if i have to relearn the different options available. but i am looking forward to participate and enjoy doing what poets do on Neopoets.
be rest assured i will return the kind gesture.
always Willy