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Rescue Me
Oh heart, rescue me.
Let your beat
Be the rhythm of life.
And when I speak,
Let not cold currents,
deceit, reign supreme.
But let me remember
There is something more
Than left, right, middle.
Something more beautiful
Than what I might scheme,
Or plan
Oh heart please
give me your warmth
Return it onto my life
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Comments
raj
Mon, 2018-08-13 16:35
Hi Tyro
this poem is unique because every stanza is almost a stand alone poem and they are so nicely interwoven with poise and elegance ...pretty exquisite stuff...a pleasure read is this heartcall...
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raj (sublime_ocean)
tyro
Thu, 2018-08-16 07:26
Hi raj
thank you, it is a reaction to the physical/mechanical trend of the west.
T
The most powerful reaction
of mind on mind
is transference of sight
author commentraj
Fri, 2018-08-17 14:01
Thanks Tyro
for helping me read the subtext...by physical/mechanical do you mean material lacking a spiritual touch?
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raj (sublime_ocean)
Rula
Tue, 2018-08-14 12:36
Hello dear tyro
an adorable call/prayer. I thought this is all that we need when our hearts go phlegmatic in this life .
If only we can do a reset and have a new start
Thank you for sharing this halcyon prayer.
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tyro
Thu, 2018-08-16 07:29
thank you dear Rula
may your heart always be pure.
T
The most powerful reaction
of mind on mind
is transference of sight
author commentIRiz
Sun, 2018-10-21 15:11
It is a great poem, that
It is a great poem, that sounds like a prayer.
IRiz