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THE WALLS DON'T TALK

Submitted by kowque on Tue, 2024-09-10 21:40

I wish
i had someone,
to argue with.

the walls,promise:
peace.
they merely suffocate you,
with silence.

i want to have
a living-
person.

one, i will never own.

one, who can argue
with me
and, help me
feel:
real.

silence, makes me feel
divisible.
many parts of a badly crafted:
puzzle.

do i even exist?

Editing stage:

Editing - polished draft

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Wed, 2024-09-11 03:40

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Rula

Thu, 2024-09-12 08:58

Hello

Especially like the last stanza.

silence, makes me feel
divisible.
many parts of a badly crafted:
puzzle.

Nothing I see need to change

Very true. Thank you for sharing.

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kowque

Fri, 2024-09-13 06:03

Thank you for

Stopping by,and the kind words :)

Koki

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Leslie

Fri, 2024-09-13 08:40

Kowque

I thought this your best poem yet Ive been preoccupied. You can email me any time and I'll do my best to respond. Great poem. I'm sorry you're so alone. I know how that is!

Today never knows what tommorow will bring!

kowque

Sat, 2024-09-14 01:12