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The Power of Silence
She was powerful
For the words
She didn’t speak
If she opened
Her mouth
You knew
It would be
A rudder
Or a cleaver
A stitch
Or a glass of water
She chose
Her words well
And her silences
Even better
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Sparrow
Sun, 2018-09-23 18:42
Greg
A well thought out piece and tells much in those few words as the lady,
Yours Ian ..
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gregwa8
Mon, 2018-09-24 17:04
thanks Ian!
thanks Ian!
IRiz
Sun, 2018-09-23 13:12
perfect write!
perfect write!
i especially like the cadence
IRiz
gregwa8
Mon, 2018-09-24 17:04
thank you!
thank you!
Geezer
Mon, 2018-09-24 13:16
Applause...
I couldn't have said it better myself! I was thinking it! But trying to be the better person, haven't said it.
Oh, I'm sure you don't know the person I am speaking of personally, but then again, a weed by any other name is still a weed! Nice job, in connecting with the reader. ~ Geezer.
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gregwa8
Mon, 2018-09-24 17:04
thanks geezer. glad it
thanks geezer. glad it connected!