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A post depression haiku
If we could go back
would we ever have eaten
that stupid apple?
Style / type:
Structured: Eastern
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments
scribbler
Sat, 2012-07-28 07:38
hello
really good senryu.................stan
Barbara Writes
Sun, 2012-07-29 16:14
Nice senyru
The decision to eat was stupid lol. Everything looking good ain't good for you. Adam and Eve found out the hard way and we still paying for it.
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WonderGolly
Mon, 2012-07-30 08:49
Good question. and my answer
Good question. and my answer is "yes"
man will eat the apple over and over again
that human nature. our imperfection is
the quality that truly defines our continues existence
as we keep on evolving in all aspects of life.
What is there to do in a perfect society?
beautiful right, short, simple and precise.
bless
respects.
WonderGolly
What I love most about POETS is how they write SADNESS with SUNSHINE on their face, caption RAIN with FALLEN EMBERS and paint TEARS using the colours of WATERFALLS:lol
Barbara Writes
Mon, 2012-07-30 11:46
lol
not get sick and die for one.
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