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Thank You
To all the people I've come to love
Heroes who keep me going all these years
Angels who shower me with hope and love
No words could express my gratitude, that's true
Kisses, hugs and prayers are all I have for you
You make me feel so blessed in this life
Only because I have you here, by my side
Until the day this life ends, my love for you never ends.......
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Review Request (Direction):
What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Is the internal logic consistent?
Last few words:
Just another try at something new..
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Comments
Ian.T
Thu, 2014-02-20 10:24
Kalid
A beaut of a write, The challenge is in the title where you use the whole alphabet to start each line, but this one is great and a very well thought out write, take care, Yours Ian.T
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alidzain
Thu, 2014-02-20 10:33
Thanks, Ian
for the visit and the comment.
Alid
Rula
Thu, 2014-02-20 14:58
khalid
Try to replace one of the two you (s) by the end of S1 and see if you like it more.
A lovely read.
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alidzain
Thu, 2014-02-20 15:29
Hi Rula
I've edited it but I wonder what if I just end that verse with just gratitude instead of "that's true".
Alid
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raj
Thu, 2014-02-20 15:45
Alid
I see you are going places and discovering new ways to express yourself, like you have done in this Acrostic. I suggest you use "Advanced Formatting" feature which is in the drop down menu below "simple formatting" and make all first alphabets in each line "Bold". Well done Alid...you have tempted me to try out an acrostic some day...
Regards,.
raj (sublime_ocean)
wesley snow
Thu, 2014-02-20 17:27
I like it.
That's all.
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alidzain
Fri, 2014-02-21 12:39
raj, make all first alphabets in bold?
how do you do that? I've changed it to advance format but still at a lost...
Alid
raj
Fri, 2014-02-21 13:17
Alid
Before I could, Rula has already explained to you how to do it...
Regards,
raj (sublime_ocean)
alidzain
Fri, 2014-02-21 13:23
i did but
for some reasons it doesn't work.:( I'll ask if my friends here might know how to do it.
Alid
raj
Fri, 2014-02-21 13:36
Alid
To all the people I've come to love
Heroes who keep me going all these years
Angels who shower me with hope and love
No words could express my gratitude, that's true
Kisses, hugs and prayers are all I have for you You make me feel so blessed in this
See I could do it as in above using Advance Formatting option which you already know. Let me try to explain step by step how I converted the T into bold T
1, Keep the cursor before T
2. Press Shift key and click on the other side of T, which will put the T in a black square
3. Now release the Shift Key and Press Ctrl key + B which will convert T to T
Try it now with one alphabet and once you are able to do it, do the same with other alphabets you want to make bold. Hope this helps
raj (sublime_ocean)
alidzain
Fri, 2014-02-21 12:37
make all first alphabets in
make all first alphabets in each line "Bold".
Rula
Fri, 2014-02-21 13:00
on advanced format
Select the text you need to make in bold or italics
then use ctl+b ...for bold
Use ctl+I ...for italics
Use ctl+u to underline
hope this helps a little.
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alidzain
Fri, 2014-02-21 13:34
finally, I did it!
Thank you guys.
Alid
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raj
Fri, 2014-02-21 13:38
Alid
Just after I gave you step by step guide I notice you had already done it. Great.
raj (sublime_ocean)
alidzain
Fri, 2014-02-21 14:27
;O)
;O)
Alid
Rula
Fri, 2014-02-21 14:39
I like your revisions
someone once said let your readers tell it is acrostic rather than you telling them it is.
I prefer it the way you did it.
Thank you
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raj
Fri, 2014-02-21 16:17
Alid
I tend to agree with what Rula has suggested. You can do that by deleting from the title "Acrostic Poem"
regards,
raj (sublime_ocean)
alidzain
Fri, 2014-02-21 20:02
done
done the deed.
Alid
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