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mute
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I can't
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Not Explicit Content
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neopoet
Wed, 2024-09-18 04:50
Neopoet AI 5-29-23 version
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Rula
Wed, 2024-09-18 12:50
Hello J.
I am sorry. But this hardly reads as a poem. Do I sound like an idiot?
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Jakub Zoltowski
Wed, 2024-09-18 19:58
Argument
I disagree, sometimes the shortest form can, evoke.
author commentRoseBlack
Wed, 2024-09-18 21:18
While there isn't much content
I am seeing that there is a connection between what was displayed and the title. My impression is that the reader has been silenced or is expected to stay silent and "can't," as it states in the last line. The use of parenthesis in the first two lines with no words symbolizes the silence. Poems generally use words to evoke imagery or symbolism. Your way is rather creative and a style all of its own. I am curious to hear why you chose to use this form and if this is a style you personally created or something you were exposed to.
~RoseBlack~
Geezer
Thu, 2024-09-19 00:37
I can't...
... ~ Geezer.
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mark
Thu, 2024-09-19 00:39
I can't
Etither,
try some of mine!