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ON THE ROAD
ON THE ROAD
I thought that eventually life would settle down
That bit of peace at last, and the time for a rest
But here I am, still travelling from town to town
At first I went North, thinking that may be best
Then I tried South, but there is a magnet in me
As now it seems that I am always heading West
Cheap motels, and simple meals in any old diner
On the road, a local radio station for company
But reaching the coast, I might feel like a 49’er
I’m not asking for your or anyone’s, sympathy
I guess my final destination’s whatever it will be
Style / type:
Structured: Western
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Contest:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Lavender
Tue, 2024-07-09 12:10
On The Road
Hello, Twizzle,
What a challenging rhyme scheme, and you've done it so well. Yep, it's the journey, not the destination. Wonderful final line.
Thank you,
L