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Dance for now
In the distance
of a dark lovely night...
we dance alone
in hope
someone will come through
the darker forest
from a horse alight
right
and pick me up
to take home
away from my home
till such a one arrives
I shall dance tonight
rain, hail or storm
dance will be the norm
come tonight
dance alright
along with me
yeah that's right
we will dance
vertically and horizontally
that's all up to me
not ye...
let me
dance for now !
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
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Comments
Rula
Wed, 2014-08-06 23:39
Loved
This is too gentle to end it up with that shout
Keep it as tender as your lone dance, will you? :)
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lovedly
Thu, 2014-08-07 11:36
Thanks I understand
softened
wesley snow
Thu, 2014-08-07 14:49
This one was very clear.
I liked it much.
W. H. Snow
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lovedly
Thu, 2014-08-07 23:01
hello Snow
thank u so much for your kind visit Sir
raj
Fri, 2014-08-08 02:13
Loved
A nice one but I agree with Rula's comment...
Regards,
raj (sublime_ocean)
lovedly
Fri, 2014-08-08 10:13
hello raj
the last caps were taken off
thanks for ur msg
another one i will post here softly one