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Détente
Thunder before rain
A rainbow offers a truce
from the raging storm
Style / type:
Structured: Eastern
Review Request (Direction):
What did you think of my title?
Last few words:
Fooling around with the Haiku form tonight.
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Geezer
Thu, 2021-08-26 07:21
I think...
that you need something like [Nature's] to go with the Detente or Detente Au Natural? ~ Geez.
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Michael Anthony
Thu, 2021-08-26 16:23
Thanks Geez! I was stretching
Thanks Geez! I was stretching the definition of the word "Detente" here: "The easing of hostility or strained relations", so I thought it appropriate with the poem. Maybe it worked, or maybe not, LOL.
Best
Michael Anthony
Geezer
Thu, 2021-08-26 19:57
Thumbs up...
Good job! ~ Geez.
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