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Second Cup
She stands in the doorway
twisting, turning, and stretching,
intent on informing me of her decisions.
A velvety-smooth approach
I’ve delighted in many times.
“I think I’m going to have a second cup of coffee,
and stay in my pajamas a while longer.
I hope you’re okay with this?”
“I think you would be foolish not to,” I say.
“The best thing about knowing you’ll have a second cup
is it makes the first cup that much more amazing,
because you know you’re going to do it again.”
She smiles in her lovely way,
thankful for the factual silliness,
acknowledging the wisdom shared.
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neopoet
Fri, 2023-03-31 10:16
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The below is a computer generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:
The poem "Second Cup" is a charming and whimsical piece that explores the simple pleasures of life. The speaker describes a moment with their companion, as they stand in the doorway having a conversation about having a second cup of coffee. The language is simple and easy to follow, allowing the reader to easily picture the scene in their mind.
One of the strengths of this poem is the way it captures the small moments of daily life and elevates them to something special. The speaker's enthusiasm for the idea of having a second cup of coffee is infectious, and it's easy to imagine how this simple act could bring joy and comfort to someone's day.
Another strength of the poem is the gentle humor that runs throughout. The speaker's response to their companion's decision to have a second cup of coffee is both playful and wise. The line "The best thing about knowing you'll have a second cup / is it makes the first cup that much more amazing" is particularly effective, as it captures the anticipation and satisfaction that can come from a simple routine.
One possible line edit for this poem could be to replace "factual silliness" with something that more accurately conveys the wisdom and humor of the speaker's response. Perhaps "practical wit" or "amusing insight" would be more fitting.
Overall, "Second Cup" is a delightful poem that celebrates the small pleasures of life and the joy that can come from sharing those moments with someone you care about.
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Geezer
Fri, 2023-03-31 14:26
I also...
got something more from this, that anyone who "runs" regularly, would see, and that is that she is dressed and in the doorway
getting ready [by twisting, turning, stretching] to go for a morning run, while her companion asks if she minds if he stays home to enjoy that second cup of coffee and be lazy. Nicely done. ~ Geezer.
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Michael Anthony
Sun, 2023-04-09 10:21
Thanks Geez. Always
Thanks Geez. Always appreciate your visits and sharing your thoughts!
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Michael Anthony
Lavender
Fri, 2023-03-31 17:43
Second Cup
Hello, Michael,
A sweet moment captured. I sincerely hope you share your lovely poetry with your wife, not just because it is so tender, but because it is "you" - the two of you. Almost like a daily journal of your companionship. AI and I will need to agree to disagree - my favorite line is "...thankful for the factual silliness..." which is expressed not by words, but by her lovely smile. Magic!
L
Michael Anthony
Sun, 2023-04-09 10:23
Hi L! I do share my poetry
Hi L! I do share my poetry with her. I am so fortunate to live with my frequent inspiration. Thank you for your spot-on comments too!
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Michael Anthony
Rosewood Apothecary
Fri, 2023-03-31 19:35
Thanks for giving us a window
For sharing the most personal beautiful moments, I thank and cherish you dear poet.
Tim
Michael Anthony
Sun, 2023-04-09 10:24
Very kind Tim, thank you.
Very kind Tim, thank you.
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Michael Anthony