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Guardians of the Night

Our dogs sometimes have trouble settling down
at night, when owls and other critters are in bloom.

Especially when we have guests.
They feel the need to check on them;
to make sure they are well, we suppose.

Once peacefulness is confirmed
they return to the comfort of our bed,
satisfied all is well and that we are not under attack
from the goblins they might imagine.

Style / type: 
Free verse
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I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
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Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

Comments

Hello, Michael,
The loyalty and devotion of our fur-babies. This is wonderful! I wonder if the word "safe" might replace one of the "well" - just a suggestion to partner with the imagined "attack."
Thank you!
L

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