The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

The poem "The Mess They Made" presents a satirical commentary on the current state of affairs in America, touching on themes of political leadership, immigration, economic instability, and societal issues.

The use of everyday metaphors, such as "The kids were let into the pharmacy with no adult supervision" and "a spill of beans on aisle nine", effectively conveys the perceived irresponsibility and chaos. However, the metaphorical language could be more consistently applied throughout the poem to maintain a cohesive narrative.

The line "They must have taken one pill too many" seems to be a commentary on overindulgence or misuse of power, but it could be clarified or expanded upon for greater impact.

The use of direct address to "America" creates a sense of urgency and personal involvement for the reader. This could be further utilized in the poem to enhance the emotional resonance.

The transition from the pharmacy metaphor to the election season could be smoother. Currently, the shift seems abrupt and could potentially confuse the reader.

The lines "Candidates? Maybe, flip a coin or elect a bald eagle" effectively use humor to criticize the perceived lack of suitable political candidates. However, the line "Or elect a bald eagle" could be seen as a cliché. Consider using a more original metaphor to convey the same idea.

The final stanza introduces the concept of a "right manager" who can clean up the mess. This introduces a hopeful note to the poem, but it could be developed further to provide a stronger conclusion.

Overall, the poem effectively uses satire and humor to critique contemporary societal and political issues. With some refinement and development of its metaphors and narrative, it could have an even stronger impact.

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I am not a big fan of starting each line with a capital, unless...
every line is a statement. Be that as it may, I do think that if you manage punctuation well,
it makes things easier. My only other criticism, is that you missed the apostrophe in [we're].

Nicely done sir, ~ Geez.
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I have a question: What is the "CDC"? I like your poem and agree that stupidity is rampant, without a cure. my favorite lines are:

It’s not all a spill
Of beans on aisle nine
Just got to wait for
The right manager
That knows how
To clean their mess

It is also my hope that America wakes up in time...

*hugs, Cat