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THIS is poetry
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8AHCfZTRGiI (HURT by Johnny Cash) if you haven't heard this you should........
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Comments
Obadiah Grey
Mon, 2021-10-04 14:37
I'll remember that for a very
I'll remember that for a very long time!
Staggeringly good.
Thanks. Obi.
scribbler
Mon, 2021-10-04 14:40
The song was originally by the group Nine Inch Nails
But I think Cash really brings the lyrics out
Obadiah Grey
Mon, 2021-10-04 14:54
Thats the first that I've
Thats the first that I've heard the song, or the lyrics.
It makes me feel both inadequate and inspired as an amateur writer.
Obi.
scribbler
Mon, 2021-10-04 18:35
Me
Too. But I'll just keep scribbling along in hope of accidentally writing something this good
lovedly
Mon, 2021-10-04 19:09
AT TIMES STAN
I wonder why or how I'm still living
many younger folks went into oblivion
left a half blind fully deaf guy in me
why this punishment for me
who ordained it
Daily I get news
so and so relative
and relative of theirs
pass by this tunnel of life
then
why not me
Isn't it blasphemy
Stan
do tell me
scribbler
Tue, 2021-10-05 00:02
Hi Loved
For some reason you are being saved for some future which neither of us see. Although not quite as old as you I have seen every single one of my close friends go to that other side. Why them and not me? Likely NOT because I'm gonna write some poem which will be recalled over the ages lol. So I guess we will need to just keep holding on until our time comes.......stan
lovedly
Sat, 2021-10-16 20:23
Hi Stan
how did I miss this?????
I feel now this site flows
slower than the Blue Nile .
I wonder where is Gee
he has gone
not since long been seen
not on the screen
have you not noticed
But I'm no where among older
yet the aged poet
though perhaps along side thee
but
when time comes
none can hold it
I lived from 13 now nearing 83
not aged tho eroded inner body
but I can say as you too may
My brain alone is alive
as daily I strive
for many hours
Someday
one day
if not today
The Vikings will arrive and on my behalf say
BYE BYE
Till then let's continue
hold my hand as long as dearest friend stan
you can
this is not a lulla bye
as yet here the oldest
we two are
neopoets
scribbler
Sat, 2021-10-16 23:38
Hmmmm.....
the real world has limited my time here lately so I'd not noticed Gee being awol. i know he has health issues and sincerely hope he's OK.
lovedly
Sun, 2021-10-17 22:11
GEE
Poemised me
o confuzed
lovedly
I'm here
can't you see
you are fastly asleep
lol
stan
ok he be
not much poetry being posted
so soundly sleep
scribbler
Tue, 2021-10-19 21:11
my muse is out of ink
But deer season is open now so maybe it will reload