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Transformation of Energy
Transformation of Energy
I don't know much,
About the nuances of poetry
But one thing is for certain,
All energy is indestructible,
For ever it’s under transformation,
My minds eye
Opens your eyes
And
My poem transforms
Into a script,
Energy continues to transform,
Bit by bit...
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
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Comments
mand
Mon, 2011-03-21 17:49
Well done Loved
I like the way you think!
Love Mand xxxxxx
loved
Mon, 2011-03-21 21:58
thank u mand
its been very sporting of u
loved
loved
Tue, 2011-03-22 08:26
my minds eye
My Minds Eye
The cortex lies in the forehead,
This is the minds third eye.
It can see,
Visualise,
Interpret,
Generate
And
All that there is in life,
This eye alone evaluates,
This is known as
The minds third eye.
loved
crypticbard
Mon, 2011-03-21 18:56
if that is the idea
behind the concept of 'tame'
then even in the activity of the lions
there may be transformation to be had!
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'write on! let these words free.'
Geezer
Tue, 2011-03-22 07:27
Did the...
the Dachshund transform into a hotdog? LOL ~ Gee
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loved
Tue, 2011-03-22 10:25
i like ur new concept
trans mogrification ... what ever
its a unique concept
glad u r along side with me
loved
Geezer
Mon, 2011-03-21 23:15
The energy of...
the transformation of the words, made this a good one. ~ Gee
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