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wHEN wE gRIEVE
wHEN wE gRIEVE
When my grandma died
Years ago
They celebrated her age...
Times have changed
Those who lived well
Drink to their good life
Passed by them
In heaven they will be blessed
Neither would they know
Nor you.
Take rest
THEN
Normal work continue
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Comments
magics02
Thu, 2011-03-24 17:49
Sad loved?
I like this tad bit of yours and wanted to tell you so. I have nothing to crit just I like it
Blessings
Mona
loved
Thu, 2011-03-24 17:52
You know our friend crypticbard
You know our friend crypticbard
lost his aged nana
he asked how to grieve.
i only wanted
to help relieve.
loved
magics02
Thu, 2011-03-24 17:54
You are so compassionate
Of the fellow writers on here loved and you are to be admired for this. Thank you for telling me
Mona
xox
loved
Thu, 2011-03-24 19:09
Please send him a message
.Please send him a message
He is perhaps
In a state of shock,
Will need your comfort
At this hour of grief.
No matter how old
The departed soul may be,
We have to feel a void,
For some time.
It’s at this hour
We need friends
Upon whose shoulders
We can rest our heads and cry
loved
scribbler
Thu, 2011-03-24 19:59
hello
i know he will appreciate this...................stan
loved
Thu, 2011-03-24 20:13
thanks AS new AEC INCUMBENT
YOU
may like to send him a
condolence or helpful message
thanks
loved
loved
Fri, 2011-03-25 09:00
thanks a lot shirls
nice of u
we must come forth at the hour of grief
in joy
many come even univited
loved
crypticbard
Mon, 2011-03-28 00:28
and I do appreciate
this deeply.
And I am in short supply of stuff to drink
and saving the champagne for my wedding anniversary!
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'write on! let these words free.'
loved
Mon, 2011-03-28 09:19
i'd like to join in the wedding anniversary and leave you
after the campagney
for your wedding delight!
that's ok right?
loved
crypticbard
Tue, 2011-03-29 06:06
let the bubbly froth
and many years toast us both
for we have kept our troth
and rekindled love's daily broth
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'write on! let these words free.'
loved
Tue, 2011-03-29 08:05
lovely words of a lovely heart
an Internet sweet heart
never as friends
should we part.
till from this unverse
we depart
loved