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Lost My Horizon....REPOSTED.....
Lost My Horizon
Here I stand watching
the setting sun submerge
yet
unknowingly emerge
beyond the realms
of my imagination
can I rise once again
I wonder
when I am all asunder
time ceases to be for me
where then in the cauldrons
of fiery sunshine
I was used to bask once
Shall I stand
as time does me raise
not a shred of drop erase
once which came in surges
now nothing emerges
upon the emptiness
desolate sands of time
I lay my entrails to be consumed
'tis my imagination
time alone shall never resume
albeit how erroneous was my thought
in the power of ego
my mind was wrought
now in the doldrums
garbage bins of everlasting time
my remains if anyone does taste
'tis time to recycle
Oh life
what an utter waste.
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Triskelion
Wed, 2022-09-07 19:58
Dang, lovedly..
...you jump around like a kangaroo...like I wrote before in the other place you posted this, (with a different title). This is a real gem. Tweek the grammar in the second (now the 3rd stanza) and give it a brilliant polish.
Thomas
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...so like my lost dreams...the flood
lovedly
Tue, 2022-09-06 13:24
DANG THOMAS
THE other one said twas ok
NOW let's wait and c
BANG BANG
THEN TWILL BE DANG
I once composed a DANG poem for a western poet
he or she earned her dentures FREE
'Iwas happy...
it was a dang gift from me
lovedly
Tue, 2022-09-06 15:50
rnx
waiting for ur DANG
Triskelion
Wed, 2022-09-07 01:20
Dang.,
..let's have a dang party! A dangaroo kangaroo are dangayou too! Say it 5times fast...!
Thomas
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...so like my lost dreams...the flood
lovedly
Wed, 2022-09-07 10:57
OK
DO SAY DANGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGSSXXX55555555555555