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Submitted by violet on Tue, 2024-04-09 09:29

We don't say it
but our bones melt into one
and become the shape of it

Style / type:

Free verse

Review Request (Intensity):

I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing stage:

Editing - polished draft

Content level:

Not Explicit Content

Comments

Geezer

Tue, 2024-04-09 10:10

Esoteric...

to say the least. I almost get it; but that's okay, I'm sure that it wasn't written just for me. ~ Geezer.
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violet

Tue, 2024-04-09 11:58

Nice to see you round these

Nice to see you round these parts after so long. Thank you and hope you're well in life.

author comment

Geezer

Tue, 2024-04-09 13:20

like it was me that hadn't posted but three poems in the last ten years! I am most pleased to see and read your work again. I guess I must have missed a bit of it when I was hospitalized with pneumonia. Yeah, I have COPD and on oxygen, but still here. I keep turning up like the proverbial bad penny or a piece of steel, hard to get rid of and attracted to Neo. like by a magnet. I do hope that you will be around more. ~ Geez.
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There is value to commenting and critique, tell us how you feel about our work.
This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place.

violet

Tue, 2024-04-09 13:40