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Submitted by Esker on Thu, 2011-07-07 12:51

arrive
surround
your words
your voice
comforting

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Editing - rough draft

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Esker

Thu, 2011-07-07 12:51

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thanks Babe!

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weirdelf

Fri, 2011-07-08 02:51

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what was your intent?

cheers,
Jess
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Esker

Fri, 2011-07-08 13:11

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Being Human we see just what we want
cheerio!

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pleiades

Sat, 2011-07-23 23:34

i echo your words back to you

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Esker

Sun, 2011-07-24 12:26

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and sates the carnivore want
a simple structure of the electronic keyboard
all the strokes
and the telephone
sending wavelengths of smooth words
and the caress of laughter
How the echoes carry me
in imagination
in every single day of thought

the words I want to hear

Oh Babe and how that river flows

Mr W..

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