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Knowing You
When the world seems
Dark and gloomy,
You shine upon my life
Like the morning sun
You are the moon
With your nightly beauty
that helps me rest
In peaceful sleep
The stars blush
At the brightness
You project
Upon a poor soul like me
Your are like the plants
Which bring the air I breath
And each breathe I take
helps me live for you.
The calming waters of the earth
Are as free as every thought
You impart to me
With clarity to my tortured soul
I am free to say
You are a true friend
Who I love
And will always feel
Proud to know
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments
Candlewitch
Sun, 2011-09-11 12:32
Dear Eddie,
This is a beautiful love poem.
always, Cat
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When someone reads your work
And responds, please be courteous
And reply in kind, thanks.
Eduardo Cruz
Sun, 2011-09-11 15:24
Cat,
I thank you from way down deep.
Eddie
LIFE ISN'T ABOUT WAITING FOR THE STORM TO PASS
IT'S ABOUT LEARNING HOW TO DANCE IN THE RAIN.
VIVIAN GREENE
Eduardo Cruz
Mon, 2011-09-12 08:34
Lonnie,
To take over I need to spend more time here, but that's going to happen soon. LOL
thanks Buddy appreciate your read and comment.
Eddie
LIFE ISN'T ABOUT WAITING FOR THE STORM TO PASS
IT'S ABOUT LEARNING HOW TO DANCE IN THE RAIN.
VIVIAN GREENE