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You're the reason
YOU’RE THE REASON
You’re the reason I’m still single
The reason I’ll never marry
And why I carry
Nitroglycerine in my pocket
I don't miss your hugs and kisses
And don't want you for my Mrs
You seem so sweet and girly
But You're the reason men die early
And want to
So my honey
I don’t need your love or money
Untie the ropes that bind me
And let me out the door
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magics02
Thu, 2011-09-01 21:27
Love it!!!
Joe
Geremia
Maestro
I am laughing stock and barrel. Really good one tonight. I needed that!!
Night to you friend. Good job. Still lmao
Mona
xoxo
Geremia
Thu, 2011-09-01 21:28
I needed to write this :)
I needed to write this :)
magics02
Thu, 2011-09-01 21:30
I hear ya
It feels too good to get it out I know what you mean my friend
Barbara Writes
Fri, 2011-09-02 01:50
great write
needed to read this. being married makes it hard to write this though it is exactly how i feel dealing with my situation.
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Geremia
Fri, 2011-09-02 01:55
When the pain becomes
When the pain becomes stronger than the fear, t s then you teave a bad situation And if anyone makes you feel less than who you are, rrun like hell!.
Joe
weirdelf
Fri, 2011-09-02 05:24
You are writing real poetry.
No excuses or plaintive submissive whinging.
cheers,
Jess
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Geremia
Fri, 2011-09-02 07:19
Geez, Jess, can't I whine
Geez, Jess, can't I whine just a little bit?
I always look for yur feedback,'
Thanks, buddy
Joe
weirdelf
Fri, 2011-09-02 07:26
Did I say
"No excuses or plaintive submissive whinging."?
No, I said you are writing real poetry.
My only complaint with your poetry is that you have so much talent that you coulld use it more.
cheers,
Jess
A new workshop on the most important element of poetry-
'Rhythm and Meter in Poetry'
https://www.neopoet.com/workshop/rhythm-and-meter-poetry
Geremia
Fri, 2011-09-02 07:41
I am good ,aen't I ? :)
I am good ,aen't I ? :)
weirdelf
Fri, 2011-09-02 07:52
You cetianly fucking are!
Never doubt it.
cheers,
Jess
A new workshop on the most important element of poetry-
'Rhythm and Meter in Poetry'
https://www.neopoet.com/workshop/rhythm-and-meter-poetry
Geremia
Fri, 2011-09-02 08:08
Sometimes I do...but then I
Sometimes I do...but then I snap out of it lol
see my new blog.