The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

The poem "I'll Never Know What Could Have Been" effectively conveys a sense of loss and regret. The repetition of the phrase "the loss of" creates a rhythm that emphasizes the depth of the speaker's grief.

However, the poem could benefit from more specific imagery. Instead of general phrases like "the future we planned" or "the life I was promised", consider using concrete details to paint a vivid picture of what the speaker has lost. This will make the poem more engaging and relatable to the reader.

The line "And the pain tears at my chest" is a cliché that doesn't add much to the poem. Instead of telling the reader about the speaker's pain, show it through unique and evocative metaphors or similes.

The ending of the poem is poignant and leaves the reader with a sense of unresolved longing. The use of ellipsis effectively conveys the speaker's hesitation and uncertainty. However, the line "If I had tried just one more time..." could be rephrased to avoid the use of the common phrase "just one more time".

In conclusion, this poem has potential but could benefit from more specific imagery and the avoidance of clichés.

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There are times, when the hurt becomes too much, and there is no 'try' left.
I can only imagine if it is a true story. I suppose somewhere, sometimes, somehow, it is.
I liked the way one could see it from each side of the room. The abuser or the abusee?
Regret with its' sharpest blade; straight in the heart. Nicely done, ~ Geez.
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Such a sad paradox, being someone with mental illness. Even if it would work, it would never come about. Too many voices ring in our ears. Telling us not to try. Never give up hope. You are not bound to your misery and neither am I.