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Too Good To Be True

Submitted by Kristen H. on Fri, 2024-08-09 21:32

This is the life I never dreamed of.

I dreamed of a life of solitude and silence,
wandering the globe with boots and a rifle,
a family of brothers...

I never dreamed of hearing the pitter patter
of tiny feet in the morning,
dancing in the kitchen,
falling into someone's arms

I never dreamed of this life...
but maybe, I dreamed too small...

This life...
is too good to be true.

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - draft
Contest: 
08/24 Too Good to be True
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content
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Sat, 2024-08-10 03:32

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Sat, 2024-08-31 14:15

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We should always dream big to get our dreams fullfilled or at least a big part of it.
Thank you for sharing

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