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Only God knows.......ed
We all live in a wilderness of time
none knows
what can happen
the next moment...
Perhaps a tsunami,
a nuclear explosion
or
the arctic melting overnight
and
the seas washing away all shores
submerging all land,
all is in the unknown hand
I call nature
you may call
God
man
and
yes
woman…..
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
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Comments
raj
Sat, 2014-03-01 15:48
Loved
i could read that the theme of your poem is about uncertainties of life irrespective of who brings about the end...but could not understand why you have chosen the title you have...
Regards,
raj (sublime_ocean)
loved
Sat, 2014-03-01 22:54
yeah so true
a guy on another site chose the title
can you suggest a better one
thanks raj
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Rula
Sat, 2014-03-01 23:33
I'd say
Only God knows...as a title
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loved
Sun, 2014-03-02 00:00
thanks Rula
thanks again
loved
alidzain
Sun, 2014-03-02 14:31
hi loved
I second Rula's suggestion. "Wilderness Of Time" is another one I could suggest..I leave it to you decide which is more fitting.
Alid
alidzain
Mon, 2014-03-03 04:12
just asking, my friend
why the "ed" in the title?
Alid
Rula
Mon, 2014-03-03 05:55
khalid
It is meant to show that it is edited
Loved... I'm happy you liked the title.
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loved
Mon, 2014-03-03 07:29
it is a must
to thank and acknowledge the other
who does contribute
I could have stated
by Rula
but twas not necessary
khalid
loved
alidzain
Mon, 2014-03-03 13:32
i see...
ok. got ya
Alid
loved
Mon, 2014-03-03 17:40
kay
ok
loved