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You two..Ian and Jess
You two
I tell all my good friends
that Ian and Jess
are the lights
the torches
the candles
the flames
and
just say any names
who have reached out
from earthly to heaven domains
to teach me poetic games
which one day,
some day
all poets will frame
in their minds
as do you two
and
I love the way you polish a poet,
innocent of poetic nuances
like you always do
You two
Style / type:
Free verse
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Comments
Ian.T
Wed, 2014-04-16 03:42
Loved
We is just Neoistic in our ways, the grand teacher Jess, and then me who talks too much, using the things taught to me by others, thank you for the compliment young Bard it is held dear, Yours Ian.T
PS:- You are not the only one that can make new words "Neoistic" the taking part in the site of Neopoet.
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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..
loved
Wed, 2014-04-16 03:57
grateful
you read it!
loved
Ian.T
Wed, 2014-04-16 04:08
Young Loved
You change your countries as one would change a shirt.
One day you are in Haiti another Canada, now Romania.
Are you an old lag or is this just Jet lol.
You have trouble settling down ???
One day you may pass my abode in Leicestershire do et me know and then I will tidy my present cave and make a cup of special tea, Have a great day, and there was me feeling sad that you were having mobility problems lol, Yours Ian.T
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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..
loved
Wed, 2014-04-16 06:23
ha ha ha
you make me laugh
as you smile
have a cup of tea
and fly with me
soar into the heavens of wisdom
where human beings visit
but seldom ...
tis my
okay
our kingdom
come heaven upon earth
when with flying imagination
we all have been done
Then come...
loved
Ian.T
Wed, 2014-04-16 08:55
Loved
You still didn't say where you are lol,
Yours Ian.T
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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..
loved
Wed, 2014-04-16 09:39
I thought I did...
still in my skin
at that edge of time
where only loved does
rhyme
okay chime
loved