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Alien’s humans
Alien’s humans
But we are not yet established as aliens
once we are able to make a city
on Moon and Mars
also get used to the atmosphere there
after many, many die in thin air
then when we establish
that we can establish,
a very bright lad like someone
okay like me, will say
see I told you we all are aliens by the way
so till then do stay
yes accept we may have been
once upon a times aliens
loitering just by the universes side way
within a dark tunnel in time
they call a holocaust ….
maybe we all were truly then cast!
if I compose any more than this
you will call me an epicurial
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Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
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Comments
Ian.T
Sun, 2014-06-08 18:33
Loved
Hurry up and pick a side,
as we are running out of patience with you humons.
You have desecrated a beautiful world with your greed.
Time to choose sides, love you all, your favourite alien.
A D Juster, Second star on the right and on till dawn..
Not one of my favourite writes..
.
There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..
loved
Mon, 2014-06-09 00:05
Not one of my favourite writes.. IAN.
sad you did not like it
now u have set a trend of dislikes
no one else will read this
so I have to act as an alien
and delete it
Wait some other alien is knocking
shall go and meet
till then enjoy my other sweet
loved
Ian.T
Mon, 2014-06-09 03:34
Loved
don't you dare erase this one it is part of the whole, the theme is different and can be expanded but it is your work.
Yours Ian.T
.
There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..
loved
Mon, 2014-06-09 05:13
Ah!
what a relief
AH!
HAHAHahahhaaa
I wasn't going to anyway
Thanks for the dare
you make me fight bare
and of course fair!
loved
Ian.T
Mon, 2014-06-09 06:48
Hey
Senryu for you:-
.
Loved you are so bad.
But a good poet all the same
Some do know your name..
.
Just have a great day and a great sense of humour.
Yours Ian.T
.
There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..
loved
Mon, 2014-06-09 12:21
Ian one for you
Ian you are so good
everyone would wish you
so does this bard loved
is it okay sir!
7 5 7
loved
alidzain
Mon, 2014-06-09 14:36
A strange theme
but I won't say this is a bad poem. Its quite unique in its own way.
Alid
loved
Mon, 2014-06-09 14:43
I am an unique
off the cuff poet
by now u ought to know
friend ur wonderful
traditional
loved