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memories only live
Sad but marvelous
memories remain immortal
we love
we lust
all else we do
we must
but memories
only last
all else does rust
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments
Leonard
Sun, 2015-03-08 06:49
How true
And we become prisoners of our memories - especially the bad unresolved ones. We live and relive them as though nothing has changed. This piece touhed something very deep within.
Cheers ... Leonard
Leonard Daranjo
"When the waiting stops, the living begins"
lovedly
Sun, 2015-03-08 10:56
thank you so much
Leonard for ur maiden visit and comment
grateful
Geezer
Sun, 2015-03-08 12:46
Lovedly...
This is one of your best works that I have read in a while! Short and sweet! No convoluted meanings and perfectly understandable. Marvelous! ~ Gee
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lovedly
Sun, 2015-03-08 15:17
that you so see Dearest Geezer...
is a feather in the Neopoet's eye
as they have converted
a poet out of me
and
so I thank
all of thee
Judy and Jess specially
raj
Sun, 2015-03-08 14:03
Lovedly
As others before me have commented, this is one of your better ones, though I feel you can work some more on this to make it flow easily on tongue...just my opinion...i wish i could suggest how..
Regards,
raj (sublime_ocean)
lovedly
Sun, 2015-03-08 23:28
thank u raj sublime
your Blessings were needed
this one fetched
a gold for me =5 stars
wesley snow
Sun, 2015-03-08 17:01
This is pleasing.
Subtle, yet I understood it.
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lovedly
Sun, 2015-03-08 18:41
thank you so much Snowman
on another site
they gave me
A GOLD==5 stars for this one
thanks
mand
Mon, 2015-03-09 03:37
Hi Lovedly
Yes I agree - this is one of your best. :) it's easy to understand and easy to relate too.
Beautiful in it's simplicity.
Love Mand xxx
lovedly
Mon, 2015-03-09 10:18
thank you mand
all kind minds think alike
Seren
Mon, 2015-03-09 10:45
Loved are you Joe ? I am
Loved are you Joe ? I am confuzzled ... damn good poem though whomever wrote it !!
love Jayne x
“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats
lovedly
Mon, 2015-03-09 11:07
no... I am not Joe
I am old Loved now technically Lovedly
coz of computer failure only
thanks many have liked it
awaiting Judy
Sparrow
Mon, 2015-03-16 11:20
Our Jayne
Lovedly was Loved
Sparrow was Ian.T
We still love you just the same your new
Papa xx
.
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Unconditional love to you all.
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Yours as always, Ian.T, Sparrow, and Yenti
judyanne
Mon, 2015-03-16 06:18
great write loved
No waffle, one of your best
I knew you could do it :)
love judy
xxx
'Each for the joy of the working, and each, in his separate star,
shall draw the Thing as he sees It, for the God of Things as They are.'
(Rudyard Kipling)
lovedly
Mon, 2015-03-16 11:04
Thanks Judie
but you took so long to read this
In a competition elsewhere
I got a Gold=5 Stars for this.
Thanks to your teaching
of slitting all waffle
regards
lovedly
Mon, 2015-03-16 11:07
Thanks Judie
You took too long to read my poetry
which won a gold =5 star
in some competition
Thanks to you
No waffle this!
Judie Regards
Sparrow
Mon, 2015-03-16 11:22
Loved
As all the other poets, a great little write.
Told you that you are OK when you put your mind to it,
Yours Ian..
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Give critique to help keep Neopoet great.
Unconditional love to you all.
"Learn to love yourself first"
Yours as always, Ian.T, Sparrow, and Yenti
lovedly
Mon, 2015-03-16 14:24
thanks
sparrowe ianed